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Fool Out of Me

A parent I thought you would be But an inconvenience I turned out to be All I needed was a hand I couldn’t have you even as a friend Lies is all you spoke, the truth I don’t believe has ever been told A story oh could I tell; of all your deceit and trails. A family is all I need, thinking I had one Well that made a fool out of me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2016 7:29:00 AM
Very powerful and emotional poem, Julie.
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:49:00 AM
Great write, the line twists add a gritty honesty,
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:32:00 AM
Woah, powerful write Julie. A very personal piece of prose there.
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Date: 1/29/2016 6:24:00 AM
A story of ordinary life whose truth I hold.
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