Fool

Fool What a fool to think What a fool to believe How cold it is cold that makes my body tremble The kiss I hold in within my soul how I wish it would leave me what a fool what a fool, am i to believe one day One day maylbe, or perhaps you would love me What a fool I am

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/24/2016 10:50:00 PM

Awwwwww...you're not a fool because you know I do and always will...... MC

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/22/2014 9:43:00 PM

Dissopointments bring soon an appointment.Dont worry.Enjoyed the theme behind.Regards. -Safa

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 8:43:00 PM

aww such a sad write - think we have all felt like this at some time in our lives:-( Hugs jan xx maybe needs the l removing - will remove this comment when you correct it xx

Sasha Rubi
Date: 11/22/2014 8:48:00 PM

Thanks, it was a free writing poem. i didn't limit myself to any poem "regulations". Just self expression, for personal growth.