Fool

Fool
What  a fool to think 
What a fool to believe
How cold it is
cold that makes my body tremble 
The kiss I hold in within my  soul
how I wish it would leave me
what a fool
what a  fool, am i
to believe one day
One day
maylbe, or perhaps you would 
love me
What a fool I am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/24/2016 10:50:00 PM
Awwwwww...you're not a fool because you know I do and always will...... MC
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Date: 11/22/2014 9:43:00 PM
Dissopointments bring soon an appointment.Dont worry.Enjoyed the theme behind.Regards. -Safa
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:43:00 PM
aww such a sad write - think we have all felt like this at some time in our lives:-( Hugs jan xx maybe needs the l removing - will remove this comment when you correct it xx
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Sasha Rubi
Date: 11/22/2014 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, it was a free writing poem. i didn't limit myself to any poem "regulations". Just self expression, for personal growth.
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