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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 4:00:00 AM

I truly liked the last line...to be fed by faith is better than grape jam...and even chocolate :-) enjoy your day, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/6/2023 5:05:00 AM

Yes it is. Have a great weekend Sara.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/5/2023 3:51:00 PM

Hello karen, lets have some now. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/5/2023 4:14:00 PM

Hello Karen, thank you. Hugs. /Darlene\

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 4:08:00 PM

Hugs hello ok and you as well Darlene.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/5/2023 12:33:00 PM

I love this haiku

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 1:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Hilda!

Karen Croft

Date: 10/5/2023 3:27:00 AM

Been there years ago when I needed help! Very true how you stated this haiku

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 5:10:00 AM

I was there too last month. It was a blessing. Thanks for reading Karen.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/5/2023 2:47:00 AM

Walk by faith be fed- woah, what a profound message here, I absolutely love your haikus, they are so vivid and profound in their depth and imageries.. I'm also loving strawberry pastries mmm, wow! A beautiful one :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 2:50:00 AM

Wow. What a kind compliment. I am still learning to write Haikus but thank you.