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The form I used to create this poem is called Scirpo,

developed by our Poetry Soup poet, Phil Capitano

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Food For Thought

In life many people will try to put you down, sometimes, they will be direct but often sneaky. Words are like weapons that leave deep scars on the soul, these bullies in life just have one reason and goal; to bring you down- laughing at the spirit they stole. I want you the think hard before you let them win, don't give them power to ever control your life; a bully is basically a coward- be strong. Turn and face them and they will run away so fast, and you can dwell in sweet tranquility at last; there are many- to friend, love in this world so vast. I offer you food for thought- just be you, okay, don't ever let someone tell you what you should do; what you should be thinking- how you should act ever, and I am going to tell you something, listen. Don't ever, ever become the thing that you hate, yes, your pride will want to get even but please wait; no matter what has been done, be a person great. ___________________________ January 3, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Food For Thought Copyright Protected, ID 19-1100-729-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Food For Thought sponsor, Silent One First Place
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Capitano Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Its easy to see why this took first place, it is warm and comforting to those who need it and chock full of good advice. Congrats.
La France Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Phil, thanks for visiting my poem, inspired by your form creation. And thanks for the congrats.
Raven Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Hi Constance, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest with this exceptional write. Well-deserved indeed. Have a wonderful Monday., Hugs....Mike. XX
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Mike, thanks for the congratulations the exceptional and the HUGS !
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 4:52 PM
gosh, dear heart, I was thinking his contest was just for one liners. I can't believe I did not pay attention. No wonder you got first place. All this great thought put into this one, and me, just doing a one liner. Good grief. Congrats on your very well deserved win.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congratulations, yes I put a lot of work into this poem, took me all day to do a draft, edit, edit and finally post, well of course as all his contests of late have been one liners it would be easy to assume that ~
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:41 PM
- At the top of the list .... congratulations on your 1st place D.H. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Anne-lise, thanks for the congratulaitons ~
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:06 PM
You are on quite a roll with #1 Winners. Congrats to you, D.H. Best wishes, Gershon
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Gershon, it is always sweet when we place but I have my share of na's too, thanks for the visit and congrats ~
Y. Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 12:21 PM
WoW! BW, I don't know how I managed to miss this, but I'm glad I found this well written piece. The message of "It's okay to be me" spoke loud and clear. I like this kind of poem because it empowers, inspires, motivates, encourages and invigorates. I want you to know that these or more than words on a page. That have power to change someone's life. I salute you for writing such a piece. You deserve to be at a the top. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Alexis, thanks for that wonderful comment, yes the one bullied is now the voice for those being bullied. Words have so much power, feel blessed to have found my poetic voice, thanks for the congratulations too !
One Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:22 AM
There will always be bullies and those who think they are right, hypocrites who like to point fingers... This is a very good poem that highlights all those points and the advice is very good... Rhymes and flows very good.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Silent, thanks so much for that contest theme that allowed me to create this poem and for my great placement ~
Toney Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Constance, excellent food for thought! ~Mark
La France Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Mark thanks for the excellent ~
Fairchild Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 3:22 AM
Thanks for this! It gives me Courage! People REALLY NEED this kind of reassurance, sometimes! Bravo!
La France Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Andrew thanks for the great comment ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:46 PM
and Dear Heart, you indeed have a kind heart! Blessings!
La France Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Kim, aah thanks for saying that ~
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