Fond Memories

through the window i peered
intricate layers of lace
painted by old man winter
obscured my view of any visible signs

the snow outside was deep
but the emotions inside ran deeper

i remember waking Christmas morn
empty plate and cup littered the sink
fancy gifts. delicately placed
beneath the now silent tree

giggles of children covered the sounds
of ripping paper being scattered about
beneath the layers of red, green, gold,
topped with only a bow, i recall that doll
trying to summersault her way over to me
(better than i ever could) little “tumbelina”
the only gift i wished for, the only thing
that seemed to matter that Christmas day
to a child who still believed in the magic
of santa, his reindeer and sleigh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Fraser Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read this Sandra, i remember wishing for just one thing at christmas and getting it. It was as magical as this poem, great write, congrats, Car
Liwayway Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Congrats on your win friend Sandra..cheers!! :)
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:07 AM
Thank you! Have a lovely day!
Sweetheart Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:44 AM
congrats Sandra on an outstanding write and win luv ..
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Thank you so very much! Have a wonderful week, hope to catch up reading and writing soon! Hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Big Congratulations Sandra love xx
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Thank you so very much :) hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:46 PM
oh my, another Thumbellina person!!! I got mine at about age 8 I think. just loved her!!! Congrats on your win.
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Thank you so very much, i think i was 7 or 8 myself....loved her more than any gift as a child, she was my friend many years :) Hugs
Ober Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:42 PM
What an awesome write. You capture the excitement of childhood beautifully. Big congrats!
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Thank you Heather...i work with kids so always see the magic through them...hugs
A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Sandra, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING POEM~LINDA
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Thank you for your sweet replies on my poems...I hope to find more time to check out the contests and catch up on reading and writing :) Hugs
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Adams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Thank you so much!
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Happy memories Sandra ...... time that was and never come back. - Love it, beautifully written!! - Thank you Sandra. - Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:20 AM
this is surly a beautiful poem a beautiful memory, surly worth being here on soup just to read gems like this. thank you Sandra...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 10:59 AM
This is so wonderful, days of innocence with the undertow of current realities. A lot more going on here than meets the eye. I enjoyed all the layers you placed within your masterpiece.
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:32 PM
fond memories! that's one thing that can't be taken away from us. I hope you have many more in your future. Enjoyed your poem.
Nickle Read Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Your words make a beautiful wrapping for the memories your poem stirs in me. Fantastic write. Read;{>
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:58 PM
thank you for your beautiful comment!
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November 25, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Children's enthusiasms on Christmas Day. Harkens back childhood memories. I wish I could bottle all the fun, surprises and energy that children bring onto Christmas morn. Beautifully written Sandra. Connie
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:58 PM
thank you Connie :)
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