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Following Their Lead

They said I'll never make it I guess they were right I never fulfilled their dreams

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2016 11:48:00 PM

Haliyma Barrow, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2015 1:29:00 AM

HALIYMA, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**

Tom Briges

Date: 3/22/2010 12:50:00 AM

Good job and really good poem keep up the work

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/19/2009 10:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/18/2009 11:49:00 AM

Excellent write. Remember the only dreams that need fulfilling in *your life* are *your dreams*, not someone else's. We each have a contribution to make to this world, some large, some small, but we all have a part to play. I believe in the butterfly effect... the littlest things can effect great changes worldwide, though we may never see it. Stay true to your heart & YOUR dreams... pack everyone else's away! Let this day be the first day of the best of your life. :) Love, Amy PS Congrats!

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 2/18/2009 4:06:00 AM

Into my favs...congrats on your featured piece, bravo! Rgds, Ernesto

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/17/2009 12:53:00 PM

As long as you fulfill your own. Congratulations on being featured this week. Follow your dreams, not their lead. God Bless. Vince

Date: 2/16/2009 4:50:00 PM

As long as you stay true to your dreams it really doesn't matter. One can't live one's life for others expectation. Nice message in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/16/2009 6:59:00 AM

Haliyma - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week - God Bless, MJ