"following the Sun"

When things are not so right and 
you've tossed and turned all night..
Shake the past off you the best you
can... Watch me take the sun and
 grip it in my hand...
Let brightness glow inside, as the
sad feelings may subside...
Follow the sun as far as you legs
will bring you... Hopefully by the end
of the day your smile won't be blue..
Let the sun be more then a clock that
show's us time...Its much more then 
that ,its like a beautiful rhyme...
And if the clouds come back some day,
try to remember the words I say...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Lee Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 3:39 AM
Great advice you give in your poem. Thanks for sharing :) -Grace
Goff Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 7:44 PM
yes! Michael! the reason why I love to take my daily walk in the sun! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo
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