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Follow the Fire

Harken! blasts of thunder pressurised magma sears Pyroclastic hearts collapse a spanner jams the gears Distended fiery fissures augur unquantified fears Cataclysms bring rupture down path’s not very clear Aneurysms bursting veins popped drums burning ears Brain function touch and go haemorrhage out red tears Earth ripping itself asunder black raw ground appears Man plugs his inner wounds holding on to love so dear By David Kavanagh

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/18/2022 8:51:00 AM

This is an impressively strong and well-crafted poem. What we're experiencing sounds like the end of the world right now, David. But love must be stronger than the most potent aspects of nature for mankind to survive the overwhelming obstacles we face on a daily basis.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/18/2022 11:46:00 AM

Absolutely Lasaad you read my poem exactly as I intended, love must be inherently stronger than nature, for human beings to be resilient and thrive against its cataclysmic forces, I’ve been on a little hiatus from the soup, looking forward to getting writing again, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/16/2022 1:26:00 PM

Ooooh. Protein packed soup. Rich and delicious. I tip my hat to thee dear poet. xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/16/2022 2:04:00 PM

Heya Super Mo, always a pleasure to see you down this neck of the woods, indeed a fuel packed lunch, love being mankind’s antidote for the fires we must live through! Oui Oui! hope you’re keeping warm and well, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/16/2022 1:04:00 PM

Quite an explosive verse David, sounds like the end of the world. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/16/2022 1:20:00 PM

Imagery is probably a bit misleading Tom, what I’m really saying is love must be stronger than natures greatest forces, for mankind to struggle on through impossible difficulties we’re constantly bombarded with in life! Have a great weekend too, cheers David