Foliage

Sun in shade and rain
On the foliage of pain
Of pent up warm steam
A moment of dark mirror
To sit face to face with you
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11/9/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kannan Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:03 AM
Beautifully written...Wise words...
Gupta Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 8:07 PM
powerful write, probir... well done!,,huggs
Gupta Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Thank you, nette ...
Callus Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 4:55 PM
This is beautifully written, with a poetic feel to it and wrapped in a metaphorical mist. Full marks to you, Probir. Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thank you, Paul for your kind visit and the appreciation .... Regards ...
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