Folding

folding wishes origami whispers AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/8/2019 9:36:00 PM

This one feels good reading it. So I say well done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2019 7:44:00 PM

this is REALLY good senryu, Line. Love when you write them this way.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 8:56:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/8/2019 10:08:00 AM

It's too darn good; it forced me to "fav". Excellent!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/8/2019 6:02:00 AM

You have captured the feeling of origami well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 10:45:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/8/2019 2:35:00 AM

Exquisite Line! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.