Folded Thoughts

Each crease folded thought
Rounded stones upon a beach
Laughing at the surf
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 2:55 PM
You do great kus, John. A deep one.
George Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 9:51 PM
Great haiku ! Congratulations on your great win.
Roper Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Great Haiku. Congratulations on your win
Caliri Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Fantastic job earning 2nd place in my haiku contest out of 71 poems! Loved the "laughing at the surf line." Amazing imagery.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 1:45 PM
A creative/wonderful Haiku write. I enjoyed it. Have a fun/great day.............
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