Foggy Vs Clear

Looks certainly have deceived me!
Without trying, you are who you are
Without doubt
A faint star only because of your place
In our place
Lands you so very far
Only because of distance
But
You are a star shining so brightly
Maybe even brighter than the rest
But
Our eyes tell us 
You are so small
I may perceive a human to be the length of my fingernail
As I stand upon some rooftop
But
If I were to stand side by side with this human
I WILL 
Realize truth! 
My eyes have deceived me
I get a closer look -
or might I say
I place each object side by side
and witness truth
Yet
This is still open for interpretation 
Because
Until I can place every single thing
In the same exact space
And
Observe every detail
Who am I to even ASSUME 
The truth?
This object has its own interpretation
As we do as well
Until things appear the same
From afar 
Or
Under our noses 
There will be no total understanding 
Of the truth
I see you star
You are who you are
Without doubt
And
I learn from you
You have the appeal so very appealing to me
I learn from you 
As I have learned my eyes have deceived me
You inspire me 
Not to mold into what I perceive others perceive me as
But
To only be me 
Because
This foolish chase is an endless race
And
I end this by first accepting me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/17/2012 2:00:00 PM
When you love yourself you can then truly love others... from soul-searching to self-affirmation. BRAVO, Brittany! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Simple Poems" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:42:00 AM
Brittany congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:19:00 AM
congrats on your win Brittany
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:47:00 AM
SUPER Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem and win!!! Terry
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:25:00 AM
BRITTANY.. A wonderful congratulations with your awesome deep poem,... God bless~ XOX*PD
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Date: 6/10/2012 9:41:00 PM
have to learn to love yourself before you can love anyone else,so true,great write Brittany
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Date: 6/10/2012 9:33:00 AM
Excellent piece of art!!!
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Date: 6/9/2012 11:24:00 PM
WOW,THIS IS SUPREME!!!! SPEECHLESS!!!
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/9/2012 11:36:00 PM
*A supreme being, my muse, was behind this poem* <3
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Justcallme Britt
Date: 6/9/2012 11:31:00 PM
A supreme being was being this <3
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