Fog Revealed

Filtering light reveals fog
The light dries all the moisture
Which is the source of the fog
So that the forest can grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/29/2010 6:27:00 PM
Sound a bit of a rain forest. The humidity that pushes the plants to great hights well done Sara...Margaret
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Date: 4/29/2010 2:07:00 PM
enjoyed mom, take care. Do I need to spank the boy?
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:14:00 AM
a fog in the forest is very humid, i've been too one with it before, when i was in grade school, they had a biosphere there.it was a really successful school is probably why they were able to afford that,it was called Vanderburg ES.weird place though.many reasons why i say that.fog feels peaceful as well, it relaxes your muscels if they are tense(: -Always & Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:42:00 AM
It happens here often as we are so close to dense areas of forest land and your poem fittingly describes the fog... like Robert Frost I would say..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:15:00 AM
This was wonderful, Sara! You painted such a beautiful scene with your words. There is something mystical to the fog, at least to me, and when reading this poem, I got a beautiful scene in my head of a forest and the break of day. Excellent poem.
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Date: 4/29/2010 4:46:00 AM
Nice picture, Sara! Thank you for your comments and well wishes!...Have a good time and keep writing---Gert
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Date: 4/29/2010 4:44:00 AM
i absorbed this just like a tree, nice one Sara,..p.d.
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