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Fog Revealed

Filtering light reveals fog
The light dries all the moisture
Which is the source of the fog
So that the forest can grow

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Margaret Foster

April 29, 2010 at 6:27 PM

Sound a bit of a rain forest. The humidity that pushes the plants to great hights well done Sara...Margaret

Doris Culverhouse

April 29, 2010 at 2:07 PM

enjoyed mom, take care. Do I need to spank the boy?

Lynette Chachere

April 29, 2010 at 10:14 AM

a fog in the forest is very humid, i've been too one with it before, when i was in grade school, they had a biosphere there.it was a really successful school is probably why they were able to afford that,it was called Vanderburg ES.weird place though.many reasons why i say that.fog feels peaceful as well, it relaxes your muscels if they are tense(: -Always & Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 29, 2010 at 8:42 AM

It happens here often as we are so close to dense areas of forest land and your poem fittingly describes the fog... like Robert Frost I would say..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Travis Tapley

April 29, 2010 at 7:15 AM

This was wonderful, Sara! You painted such a beautiful scene with your words. There is something mystical to the fog, at least to me, and when reading this poem, I got a beautiful scene in my head of a forest and the break of day. Excellent poem.