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Fog as new as this charcoal gray day Or is it really old Like damp, dirty wool fluffed upon Pines, if only it were gold Luscious verdant leaves of spring muted Yet dampnes has a part In life's cycle, the nature of earth It has from the very start Did man in the garden of eden Live saturated in damp Or was there perfect conditions Where he could stomp and ramp

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/16/2017 2:18:00 PM

I find both the poem and picture beautiful and thought provoking, Sara. I believe that the conditions in the garden of Eden were perfect when compared to our present world! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/16/2017 3:30:00 PM

Paul, I agree with you that the conditions in the Garden Of Eden were perfect for all things man, animal, plants..A perfect life to be enjoyed..Sin came in and ruined it all..Your presence at my page was encouraging..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2017 7:10:00 PM

what a wonderful description of the day. I feel since the garden of eden was suppose to be perfect, temperature, greenery, and nature were all perfect especially if they run around with no clothes.. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/15/2017 11:33:00 AM

Eve, I believe that it was perfect in the Garden Of Eden in a way that we have not idea what it was like..I have seen Gorillas in their natural habitat and they just lie around eating the greenery that they eat and seem so relaxed..However, there are insects all around them, and they are really on the constant alert to some treat of any animal that would eat them or another male who would take over their territory so that is not exactly The Garden Of Eden..Sara

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/8/2017 7:53:00 PM

I'm certain Ol' Adam was a puddle jumper, Mrs Sara:) A few more weeks and we'll be begging for rain. I enjoyed your poem:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/15/2017 11:30:00 AM

Yes, we are already needing rain here but it is suppose to rain today and the quiet falling rain will be delightful..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/7/2017 12:19:00 AM

Excellent descriptive piece my friend. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/7/2017 6:44:00 AM

Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you reading my work..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/6/2017 7:50:00 PM

Funny you should ask that question. Before the days of Noah it did not rain. Water came up from the ground and watered the earth. That's one reason that the rainbow didn't appear until then. I'm going to try to be back now. Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/7/2017 6:43:00 AM

John, Good to see your name again..Yes, it does say in the Bible that water came up from the ground..I was just thinking that was the atmosphere around the earth wetter before rain started to fall..Of course, we can't really know the answer..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2017 2:11:00 PM

- It's beautiful ... even if it's not gold, Sara - A good poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2017 4:18:00 PM

Yes, fog is a lovely sight..Of course, not to all people..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Barry Stebbings

Date: 6/5/2017 8:21:00 AM

Charming descriptive piece, Sara. Especially liked the last stanza - a new point of view! // Barry.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2017 4:15:00 PM

Barry, Thanks for the comments about my work..I think often about what could it have been like for mankind in the Garden of Eden..Perfect conditions with no worry of evil happening..Sara

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 6/4/2017 7:11:00 PM

Nice craft. I love your use of imagery and rhetorical.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2017 6:01:00 AM

Adeniji, You presence at my work is uplifting..Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment..Sara