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poem submitted to "Eight by Eight" poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor, August 1, 2026

FOG OF EFFLUVIAN

Effluviam drifts in, unseen,
bruised exhales moving through the day.

It rises slow, a toxic fog~
mist born from truths we didn't keep.

It rises quite invisibly,
shrouding thoughts then slipping away.

It moves with soft, corrosive wings,
rusting the clarity I seek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 1, 2026 at 9:07 PM
This poem has no effluvious effect on me whatsoever, Sara. And that's a good thing. 😊 Gershon
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August 1, 2026 at 7:09 AM
With great imagery and wonderful high-level diction, you reply to the prompt perfectly. Best wishes for the contest.
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