Fog Creeping In

In the deep darkness There is a grey mist rolling A fog creeping in With any light you can see The grey mist tailing on by
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 7:56 PM
I like your description here of the fog, Russell. I have not seen this in a while, but it does happen once in a while around our parts.
Johnson Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 4:52 PM
fog in mind, i have been there, brain damage got me yeh, 15 years to get away, shut up brain, now speak you may, onetime! re: Russell Sivey 'Fog Creeping in' Don
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August 9, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Very descriptive work ...Wonder if you are having fog where you live or if you are in a fog?....Thanks for stopping by...Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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