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Fog Creeping In

In the deep darkness There is a grey mist rolling A fog creeping in With any light you can see The grey mist tailing on by Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2012 7:56:00 PM

I like your description here of the fog, Russell. I have not seen this in a while, but it does happen once in a while around our parts.

Don Johnson

Date: 8/9/2012 4:52:00 PM

fog in mind, i have been there, brain damage got me yeh, 15 years to get away, shut up brain, now speak you may, onetime! re: Russell Sivey 'Fog Creeping in' Don

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2012 2:11:00 PM

Very descriptive work ...Wonder if you are having fog where you live or if you are in a fog?....Thanks for stopping by...Your comments were uplifting..Sara