Fog

Mysterious fog, rolling over
the hills and valleys, hiding
secrets and muting sound.
Out of the white mantle
comes the song of a bird,
seeming to enjoy his cool
morning hideaway..
Go into this magic..hold
out your hand , feel the wet
and wander like a blind man.
It won't last, but while it does,
play with the witchcraft
that is fog.......

written 7/19/13
for Broken Wings' Honorable Mention contest
Barbara Gorelick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gasun Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 12:35 PM
A very beautiful nature poem crafted from your magic words my dear friend, BG. It's my pleasure to read it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing and belated Congratulations ! Hugs! May I also have this chance to thank you for your kind visit on my poem and your lovely comments. God bless! love lots, Leonora
Gorelick Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. Havent been around much lately, trying to get back in the swing of things. Barbara
Pinet Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Your poem brings us back to nature once more to reawaken our taste for its purity and wonder. Emile.
Gorelick Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 11:01 AM
oops, Im brain dead this morning..my reply above. BG
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