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On misty road Not quite yet dark The landscape growls No warning bark Be vigilant As hidden here Inside your mind Uncaptured fear They roam outside To trap, ensnare Grey blanket hides The monsters there The causeway twists Into the clouds Boundaries draped In vapour shrouds Blink too long In hypnotic mist Mistakes will spiral Into it's dark abyss Already giants Peer from the grey Entice you for "a feast" they say Hold your nerve Be strong, be stable Don't accept the call To the giants' table Samsun Scott 13th September 2023

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Date: 9/14/2023 2:25:00 PM
Your poem captured me all the way through. Will be looking out for monsters and giants now. Enjoyed your poem Sam. Thank you. Emilia : )
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:43:00 PM
So kind of you to stop by. Many a foggy drive has shapeless entities emerging through the mist, let's hope they are passive :)
Date: 9/14/2023 7:23:00 AM
This is so symbolic and has a deep meaning, Sam:) very nice:)
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Date: 9/14/2023 7:39:00 AM
I am so glad you think so Joanna; that warms my foggy heart :)
Date: 9/13/2023 5:20:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:34:00 AM
Why thank you Jeanette :)

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