Focus

I feel ready to explode
Compressed and about to lose control
Stressed over every little thing

Moments of sunfilled peacefulness
Outweighed by longer bouts of cloudiness
Feeling the stress
Of not having my life together

And I’m lonely
I need someone to care about
Someone to build a life with
Someone who won’t want
To disappoint me

That’s my real long-term goal
And if I kept that focus
I’d be fine


AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sewumber Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 4:31 PM
I understand your pain. That's life. It's thorns may become painful indeed. Love your write. Continue, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Beejadhur. Happily I'd like to report that eventually we figure it out... though it sometimes takes a while. Best wishes.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Beejadhur. Happily I'd like to report that eventually we figure it out... though it sometimes takes a while. Best wishes.
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