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I feel ready to explode Compressed and about to lose control Stressed over every little thing Moments of sunfilled peacefulness Outweighed by longer bouts of cloudiness Feeling the stress Of not having my life together And I’m lonely I need someone to care about Someone to build a life with Someone who won’t want To disappoint me That’s my real long-term goal And if I kept that focus I’d be fine AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 7, 2017

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Date: 11/11/2017 4:31:00 PM
I understand your pain. That's life. It's thorns may become painful indeed. Love your write. Continue, my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Beejadhur. Happily I'd like to report that eventually we figure it out... though it sometimes takes a while. Best wishes.
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Beejadhur. Happily I'd like to report that eventually we figure it out... though it sometimes takes a while. Best wishes.

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