Flying With the Wind

Over the sea galloping upon waves 
in the swift uplifting rush of the tide
Chariots of fire blush red the rose swept up 
by the whirlwind holding a breathless whisper

Upon these foundations the rock stands 
sings out one bird of valuable beauty 
sweet music echoing deeply
through the voice of a Heavenly choir

Oh gracious gemstone 
you are the fruit of loves light 
who pierces the deepest crevices 
of one's mind

In a castle of dreams 
fringed with gold 
bring me a bow 
of burning incense

Fragrantly it blossoms in the mind 
Consuming divine fire 
I come and bow down 
to your Heavenly being

(Unrhymed Quatrain) Co written by Maria Mc Laughlin 
and Liam Mc Daid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Zubair Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 4:49 AM
Its very nice poem about meeting of two souls. Congratulations on your unique right.
Eastman Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 10:33 AM
A beautiful piece of work. I can't imagine doing a collaborative piece without actually being there with them. You did wonderfully.
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Very intense collaborative work ..I enjoyed reading it today..Way to go..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Nice co-lab keep them coming! Light & Love
Muideen Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Beautiful write Liam, this is so sweet and emotive..........A.M.
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Hi Liam and Maria!Another very beautiful captivating love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration with your very dear sister Maria.Very beautifully written!Just dazzling!This poem is so romantic and sweet filled with lots of love,warmth,passion and tenderness.Awesome imagery!A very romantic dreamy sweet poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Great collaboration!A 7 +++to each!A fav.I enjoyed it!A very enchanting beautiful piece!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Christian Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Lovely write, sounds sweet
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:18 AM
- Liam, a beautiful writing with Maria - "In a castle of dreams" ... anything is possible! - I wish you a great Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adhab Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 5:32 AM
beautiful Imagery, the idea of blending contradictory parts. alltogether a fine peace of art. thank you for sharing. Ali
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