Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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Flying South

c a n a d i a n 
  
                                                                                g e e s e
                                                                                                                  
                                                                             fly in v formation ~

                                                                   s n o w f l a k e s  

                                                              f a l l






Lets Get Creative With Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

03/19/21

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Gershon Wolf March 26, 2021 at 2:44 PM Here's to your creativity and to your win in Constance's contest, Jan! ~ Honk, honk, :) gw

Paula Goldsmith March 26, 2021 at 2:33 PM Congratulations on your win. Love your birds, write and picture. Can I fly away with them?????? Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Constance La France March 24, 2021 at 3:15 PM Jan, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance

Juliet Ligon March 23, 2021 at 2:52 PM Your layout looks like the v formation that birds make but also like a Canadian goose head. Clever!

Howard Kerr March 23, 2021 at 12:53 PM Hello JAN, This is creative writing at its best. Well done. Thanks for your compliments on my entry. Warmth Howard

Paul Callus March 23, 2021 at 7:14 AM I have seen videos of Canadian geese in flight; they offer a wonderful sight! I like your creative 'formation' :) Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick March 23, 2021 at 5:10 AM Can't blame them for flying south. LOL. They go north by here in the spring. I have seen one flock heading north but maybe a month ago. Brave souls they are. Thanks for the visits. Sara

Suzette Richards March 23, 2021 at 2:34 AM Congratulations with your top win with this lovely haiku, Jan :)) ~Sus

Line Gauthier March 22, 2021 at 8:55 PM Beautiful poem, Jan ~

Kim Merryman March 22, 2021 at 4:21 PM Cleverly done, Jan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Ashley March 22, 2021 at 2:25 PM Dear Jan, it’s a pleasure for me to return with congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest with this lovely haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2021 at 2:10 PM very cool KU, Jan. Congrats on your win.

Kai Michael Neumann March 22, 2021 at 1:41 PM Wonderful. Congratulations on your winning poem. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen March 22, 2021 at 12:37 PM - Back with a big congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:28 PM Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. March 22, 2021 at 11:40 AM Hi Jan, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your 1st and place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:28 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2021 at 2:00 AM Oh, I like the way you typed this like a gaggle of flying geese! Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM Thanks so much Caren it took me ages to get the formatting correct:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin March 21, 2021 at 6:02 PM They are a sight to behold. I live in the central flyway and see them in the spring and again in the fall. We even have locals that stay all summer. I get to see geese every day here. Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM Thanks so much Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Quoth Theraven March 21, 2021 at 12:36 PM Jan, This haiku filled the skies in a nice formation. Canada's only major American invasion. -Richard Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:26 PM Thanks so much Richard your comment made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer March 20, 2021 at 2:08 PM just lovely, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:26 PM Thanks so much Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta March 20, 2021 at 12:00 PM Well done, Jan! Much better than watching the Luftwaffe in formation! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:25 PM Thanks so much Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley March 20, 2021 at 10:30 AM Dear Jan, you are so creative! I love the V-formation of the body of your poem to mirror the beautiful content of your haiku. Splendid imagery and format. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:24 PM Thanks so much Susan I had fun creating the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. March 20, 2021 at 7:54 AM Hi Jan, You've penned a beautiful and creative haiku. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:23 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham March 20, 2021 at 2:58 AM A spectacular sight Jan, I always hear them before I see them. Good luck in the contest and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:23 PM Thanks Tom, yes they certainly are very vocal-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar March 20, 2021 at 1:01 AM Don't tell me winter is back!! Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:22 PM I hope not Victor-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel March 19, 2021 at 7:51 PM Loved your haiku and the shape too, Jan:) way to go:) Jan Allison March 22, 2021 at 4:21 PM Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

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