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Flying Solo

I’m apathetic, Unaffected: Flying solo, I’m disinterested. I see my sins that must be corrected, is it too late for this to be perfected? So I’ve elected, to be tested and retrieve what I have so neglected. I abused what I should’ve respected, this terminal decline must be arrested.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 10:29:00 AM
An awesome reflection on apathy, Lee. And I really like the way you employed the monorhyme. Not an easy form to follow, but you succeeded well! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:21:00 AM
NICE!
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:47:00 AM
Enjoyed thank you.
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