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Flying On Broomsticks

The witches all go
Flying on their great broomsticks
I fall to their strike

Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu - no nature poems please" contest

9/17/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

September 19, 2012 at 9:45 PM

This reminds me of those flying monkeys in the Wizard of Oz. WAsn't that evil witch flying in the air as well?

Jack Horne

September 18, 2012 at 8:41 AM

sure to do well, Russell - great senryu

Bukang Liwayway

September 18, 2012 at 7:33 AM

nice poem Russell. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 17, 2012 at 9:36 PM

excellent visual delight Russell luv .. wishing u a big win my friend .. must check this one out now that I have succeeded in completing your entry .. awesome creation my friend ..