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Flying On Broomsticks

The witches all go Flying on their great broomsticks I fall to their strike Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu - no nature poems please" contest 9/17/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 9:45:00 PM

This reminds me of those flying monkeys in the Wizard of Oz. WAsn't that evil witch flying in the air as well?

Jack Horne

Date: 9/18/2012 8:41:00 AM

sure to do well, Russell - great senryu

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/18/2012 7:33:00 AM

nice poem Russell. Good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2012 9:36:00 PM

excellent visual delight Russell luv .. wishing u a big win my friend .. must check this one out now that I have succeeded in completing your entry .. awesome creation my friend ..

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/17/2012 8:39:00 PM

You fall to their strike? I was not aware witches had a union. Good senryu for the contest.