Flying Kites

Ah, those were days of fun
Behind a falling kite we would run
Exhilaration when we got hold
As if it was a pot of precious gold

Flying colourful kites high in air
We felt proud of our flair
Aim was to cut other players kite
It was such a fun filled fight

At times kite would get struck in tree
Trying to get it down, so much glee
When in poverty, we could not buy
To make our own, we would try

Now I hardly see kites in sky
Kids don't know how to fly
Hooked on to electronic games
It is boring they all exclaim

Our old fun games are all vanishing
Electronic games, I feel like banishing
Joyous memories outdoor games hold
Bestow happiness everytime they're retold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Poteet Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 1:36 PM
This is special, Rama. Such a delightful interesting topic to read amidst all the other romance, love and sensual pieces. They're okay; but I get a little tired of reading of other people's failures and successes in love affairs. This was totally refreshing, thanks for sharing this gold piece. (IMHO). Congratulations on you HM; it speaks clearly and loudly here.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Thanks
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Flying kites" is a wonderful story/write. Kites were so much fun. I do not know if they even make kites anymore. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Thanks. God bless!
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 3:54 AM
Yes, children do spend a lot of time inside playing video or other games. I never had a kite, but our son did own one which he enjoyed. He loved thin-wood airplanes that he would sail into the air. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thanks
Merryman Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:01 AM
You are so right, Rama! Technology has ruined childhood for many. They'll never know the fun of using your imagination. Great write! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 3:39 AM
I agree. Thanks
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Great work. Beautiful memories. Congratulations!
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 3:39 AM
Yes wonderful memories! Thanks
Cunningham Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Sad that kids now hide in their rooms living on social media. When I was growing up I was always outside and feel better for it. Hope you're keeping well Rama. Tom
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 10:27 AM
So true. I am fine, hope the same with you
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