Jan Allison Poet Cinquain

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Flying High - Visual 5

Soaring
Free as a bird 
No wings to restrain us 
Blown gently on salmon pink clouds 
Heaven! 



01~11~15
Contest: An American Beauty – Andrea Dietrich
Visual 5: Balloons
Checked Using How many Syllables 2,4,6,8,2
~awarded 4th place~

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Fred Chitanga September 13, 2015 at 10:26 AM Yeah, nice peace Jan Allison September 13, 2015 at 10:29 AM Thanks Fred:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper June 9, 2015 at 8:24 PM Beautiful visual you brought to life a 7++ Jan Allison June 10, 2015 at 1:13 AM Thanks Eve I do love this image - so calming and the colours are divine:-) Hugs jan xx

Peter Lewis Holmes May 4, 2015 at 6:53 PM Light and airy Jan...nice write...btw...thanks for the comment...Peter Jan Allison May 5, 2015 at 1:07 AM Thanks so much Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:32 PM JAN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT Jan Allison February 1, 2015 at 2:33 PM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan

Barbara Gorelick January 28, 2015 at 11:15 AM Good for you Jan..Congrats on your win..I enjoyed your poem. BG Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:36 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 9:56 AM Coming back to congratulate you, Jan, on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:35 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2015 at 3:45 PM !!! : > )...Way to go..Sara Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:35 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani January 26, 2015 at 2:36 PM I wrote cinquain for visual 4 & 5. Then read yours and decided to go with 4! You did good. Congrats. Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:35 AM Thanks so much Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 12:13 PM Hi Jan, just circling back with huge congratulations for your well-deserved win! warmest regards. Pandita Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:32 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 26, 2015 at 10:26 AM "salmon pink clouds " win for Jan. Love and regards from me Jan>rajat Jan Allison January 29, 2015 at 11:32 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath January 26, 2015 at 2:31 AM Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl Jan Allison January 26, 2015 at 2:33 AM Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker January 25, 2015 at 7:48 PM Hi Jan, Great poem. Great win. Very smooth and relaxing. Congratulations. Earl Jan Allison January 26, 2015 at 1:38 AM Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan x

Arlene Smith January 25, 2015 at 7:32 PM What a happy day that will be when my soul ascends to heaven.. Congrats on a truly beautiful win, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene Jan Allison January 26, 2015 at 1:37 AM Thanks so much Arlene:-) Hugs jan xx

Joseph May January 25, 2015 at 3:54 PM Great write Jan...congrats on the win Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 3:59 PM Thanks so much Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 3:37 PM You were flying high with this one, Jan. The forth line is what wowed me. Just love the idea of the salmon pink clouds. LOVELY. Congrats and HAPPY BIRTHDAy to YOU. Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 3:39 PM Thanks so much Andrea another win on my birthday I am on cloud 9:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:24 PM Lovely, congratulations. Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 3:26 PM Thanks so much Richard I feel I am in good company - we chose the same image:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight January 25, 2015 at 3:14 PM Hi Jan, stopping back to say congratulations on your nice win for your inspiring cinquain. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 3:18 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) I enjoyed reading the winning poems:-) Hugs jan x

Paul Callus January 25, 2015 at 2:23 PM So lovely to be able to come back with congrats on a very worthy winner, Jan!! Well done:) hugs // paul Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 2:40 PM Many thanks Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Marilyn Williams January 24, 2015 at 10:59 AM Little, but just right. Jan Allison January 24, 2015 at 12:02 PM Thanks Marilyn it has to fit within a certain syllable count for the contest glad you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan x

Joseph May January 23, 2015 at 6:39 PM great write Jan....congrats on POTW Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 7:36 PM Thanks so much Joseph:-)I am delighted with the honour:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr January 23, 2015 at 9:55 AM congratulations Jan on Poem of the week,well done. Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 10:39 AM Many thanks Robert I was delighted to find out on Sunday:-) Hugs Jan x

Sandra Haight January 22, 2015 at 11:09 AM Wonderful Cinquain, Jan! Congrats on it being selected Poem of the Week! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 2:21 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Neva Romaine January 22, 2015 at 8:22 AM Hey Jan, congratulations on your poem being selected...a soft and sweet expression. Thanks for sharing..Neva Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 2:21 AM Many thanks Neva:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong January 22, 2015 at 2:41 AM I loved this poem Jan. Big congrats on having it honored as poem of the week! Hugs, Connie Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 2:20 AM Thanks so much Connie:-) Hugs Jan x

Zakhe Michael Mcunu January 20, 2015 at 4:06 PM SIMPLY GREAT... Jan Allison January 20, 2015 at 4:16 PM Thanks so much Zakhe:-) Hugs Jan xxx

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