Flying Above Ground

Delightfulness abounds
Dreaming dreams
Flying above ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Well done Sharon... not the usual 575 meter, but that rule was made to be broken anyway! love the 'd' alliteration. Regards, Keith
Gulley Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, Keith for the nice comment on this haiku. I have never really been that great at this one, but I keep trying, Ha, ha, ha.....Sharon : )
Nunez Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Flying haiku! :-) It's a modern one, I see...or is it senryu? Hi Sharon...it's lovely to see you poetry...let me check out some more...Kim
Gulley Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so very much Kim, for the sweet comments......Sharon
Konos Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 2:57 PM
that is the best hovercraft I have ever read...Congrats...
Gulley Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Thank you Judy so very much. : ) Sharon
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