Flying

My feet hit the ground
But I feel like I’m flying
The wind blows through my hair
The clouds caress my skin
I close my eyes tight
To enhance this sensation
Really feel what it’s like
To be above the world
Like a star gleaming in the sky
Like a rainbow dancing over the land
I can look down at the world
Seeing everything so small
The world is less complex
With no cares to bother me
No problems I cannot handle
Up here amongst the clouds
Life seems much easier
There’s no enemies to face
No work to get in my way
I can go wherever I please
See things I thought I’d never see
Fly to the tops of mountains
Float gently over the seven seas
Take in all of this world’s wonder
The planet is beautiful from up here
Seeing what no one has ever seen
A beauty that is rare to find
I could live in the sky forever
See the world from this point of view 
Until eternity runs dry
But my feet are glued to the ground
My body isn’t a weightless form
I cannot soar in the clouds
I cannot see rare beauties
That I’ve only dreamt about
I open my eyes
The world is still beautiful
A little more complex and loud
The beauty still remains
With my feet firmly on the ground
I’ll walk to the places I long to see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Pettit Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Nice way to describe vicarious journeys. One's imagination can take you to anywhere in the universe.
Frtiz Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Thank you!!
Tsiluma Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 5:08 AM
Wow Tahnee! Excellently penned! I love how you bring the reader to the vision of flying and what the world would be like from that point of view and then how you bring us back to the ground but still keep the hope alive. Very well penned!
Frtiz Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Thank you!!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace