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Flyin' Free

My wings are wide Slicing through the air Nothing to hide Life is how I see fair I look down and see The world down so far And then there is me A lone bright shining star So in case you haven't heard Just look up to see I'm flyin' like a bird I'm flyin' free I hope the world sees me!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2009 3:45:00 PM

I love the "free spirit" quality to this poem, Jen. And surely the world can see one whose "wings are wide" and has "Nothing to hide." Great quatrain! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2009 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Jen for sharing your amazing poetry with us all today. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/2/2009 6:37:00 PM

Cool Quatrain Jen. Zat you on t'other side of the cloud from me? You lookin free!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/2/2009 5:50:00 PM

Hope your pen doesn't skip out and the ideas flow, fluidly!

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/2/2009 5:15:00 PM

i see you happy girl . John H Loving III