Jen H. Poet Quatrain

Flyin' Free

My wings are wide
Slicing through the air
Nothing to hide
Life is how I see fair

I look down and see
The world down so far
And then there is me
A lone bright shining star

So in case you haven't heard
Just look up to see
I'm flyin' like a bird
I'm flyin' free



I hope the world sees me!

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Carolyn Devonshire December 3, 2009 at 3:45 PM I love the "free spirit" quality to this poem, Jen. And surely the world can see one whose "wings are wide" and has "Nothing to hide." Great quatrain! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown December 3, 2009 at 10:28 AM Thank you Jen for sharing your amazing poetry with us all today. I enjoyed the read. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne December 2, 2009 at 6:37 PM Cool Quatrain Jen. Zat you on t'other side of the cloud from me? You lookin free!

Doris Culverhouse December 2, 2009 at 5:50 PM Hope your pen doesn't skip out and the ideas flow, fluidly!

John Loving Iii December 2, 2009 at 5:15 PM i see you happy girl . John H Loving III