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12/28/2025 for Lyrical Tribute Poetry Contest sponsored by Tom Woody 

Fly on Angel

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye, the story of love is hello and goodbye...until we meet again" 

~ from an unpublished poem by Jimi Hendrix. 

A shy boy came of age in purple smoke
and learned to play a guitar that spoke
with a voice of feedback and bending note. 
"Fly on angel" were words he wrote. 

Not yet heard of, psychedelic, 
both demonic and angelic, 
his guitar was something wild, 
a nineteen-sixties flower child.  

     Life and love is hello and goodbye
     until we meet again - 
     gone, in the blinking of an eye,
     a flower among men.  

Wordless sound stories spun from strings
gave cosmic flight to little wings, 
made my consciousness swirl 
and open up to find a pearl.

His life upon this earth was brief,
An eye blink took him like a thief. 
"Fly on angel", he wrote before he died.
"Tomorrow, I'll be by your side". 

     Life and love is hello and goodbye
     until we meet again - 
     gone, in the blinking of an eye,
    a flower among men.
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Godwin Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 5:03 PM
Wow, your ROCKED this contest
Crandall Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 10:33 PM
haha - I like your choice of words!
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 6:43 AM
Congrats on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
Crandall Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:30 PM
Hope you're doing OK!
Crandall Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:29 PM
Thank you, Sara,!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Your "Fly on Angel" is a very creative write. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" Hope You Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away...............
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:17 PM
Thanks, Paula!
Swan Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 3:39 AM
I like your tribute with the refrain middle and end, and the conversation with the guitar's voice. An enjoyable read. J :)
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:17 PM
Thanks, Jeanette!
Crandall Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Thanks, Jeanette!
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