Fly, Not As I

Fly, Not As I

Vapor trails of jetting Jets
Pattern the dawn blue sky;
I gaze unseeing the passengers
With courage to fly, not as I.

Without firm ground beneath my shoes,
Fear straddles my old shawled shoulders.
Is this what it is, I muse
To be “older” and growing “older.”

In my closed eyes a boulder rises to my face,
Safe, soft statistics drift like shreds, crumble.
In my world this feeble flying fear
Freezes good sense; I am humbled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ray Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Such a beautifully written poem. I love the imagery you use throughout it.
Vaso Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Ah, I know this feeling, very creative write!
Gauthier Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 10:23 PM
Well crafted poem, Sunlite.
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 5:04 PM
I love how you expressed feelings in this poem. Well done Sunlite :)
Cresswell Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 3:30 PM
You are not alone. A good write.
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