Fly Low

Domesticated
Three geese, unable to fly
Honk quite noisily

Three Canada Geese fly low
Honk noisily, circle, land

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Olusegun Arowolo

September 5, 2014 at 2:46 PM

Wonderful piece,Sara..Lovely presentation...Congrats on your win...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 5, 2014 at 11:36 AM

Congrats on winning awesome write Sara!

Joseph May

September 5, 2014 at 9:29 AM

Congrats on a fine win Sara...

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 9:02 AM

Congrats on a well deserved win. A lovely read. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2014 at 9:55 PM

congrats on the win, Sara.

Debbie Guzzi

September 4, 2014 at 7:57 PM

Congrad's on your win Sara Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 4, 2014 at 6:48 PM

And how nice when we hear them as they fly by letting us know the seasons begging or end. Always lovely. Congratulations Sara.

Carrie Richards

September 4, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Such a great comparison!! Nicely done, Sara!!

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 4:29 PM

i love the contrast between the tame and wild geese great win:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

September 4, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Congratulations on your podium finish, Sara! This is a honky tonky tanka:) enjoyed // paul

Robert Nehls

July 6, 2014 at 6:37 AM

This is a good one, Sara. I can see it all because when I go for my morning walk there is a pond where many geese hang out. I does appear that there are some that never leave and some that only come to visit. I love watching them as they communicate. very nice scene, my friend.... Robert.

Jack Horne

July 5, 2014 at 3:47 PM

love picturing these geese - maybe they wondered what it was like in the other birds' shoes

Cherl Dunn

July 5, 2014 at 8:06 AM

This is an interesting write, enjoyed reading it today. cheri

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2014 at 9:05 AM

Are the three in the top part the same as the bottom part of the poem? This makes me curious to know what they are doing in the air and how they became domesticated!! Did you hear a story about them, sara?