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Fly Low

Domesticated Three geese, unable to fly Honk quite noisily Three Canada Geese fly low Honk noisily, circle, land

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2014 2:46:00 PM

Wonderful piece,Sara..Lovely presentation...Congrats on your win...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:36:00 AM

Congrats on winning awesome write Sara!

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2014 9:29:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Sara...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/5/2014 9:02:00 AM

Congrats on a well deserved win. A lovely read. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 9:55:00 PM

congrats on the win, Sara.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2014 7:57:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Sara Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 6:48:00 PM

And how nice when we hear them as they fly by letting us know the seasons begging or end. Always lovely. Congratulations Sara.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/4/2014 4:36:00 PM

Such a great comparison!! Nicely done, Sara!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 4:29:00 PM

i love the contrast between the tame and wild geese great win:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2014 3:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your podium finish, Sara! This is a honky tonky tanka:) enjoyed // paul

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/6/2014 6:37:00 AM

This is a good one, Sara. I can see it all because when I go for my morning walk there is a pond where many geese hang out. I does appear that there are some that never leave and some that only come to visit. I love watching them as they communicate. very nice scene, my friend.... Robert.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2014 3:47:00 PM

love picturing these geese - maybe they wondered what it was like in the other birds' shoes

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/5/2014 8:06:00 AM

This is an interesting write, enjoyed reading it today. cheri

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2014 9:05:00 AM

Are the three in the top part the same as the bottom part of the poem? This makes me curious to know what they are doing in the air and how they became domesticated!! Did you hear a story about them, sara?

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/1/2014 12:06:00 PM

Oh I love to see geese flying overhead. Aren't they beautiful? A well-painted picture of words.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2014 2:39:00 PM

Guess we all have to land aye? Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/30/2014 12:09:00 PM

ohhh, all your words are of substance, sara.. no fillers here and i like the repetitive feel of this piece.. huggs