Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Lento

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For Charles Messina's Contest " Lento Soup". Dated August 20, 2026.

Fly In Reverie CM

Rising scarlet sun shimmers for a long while, 
hanging in the halcyon horizon of color pile.
I get from it the dulcet gift of a promising day, 
try to walk another unknown mile all the way.

In seamless spread of the cerulean satin sky 
thin cotton cloud clumps float cheerfully high.
Their flotilla format allures me to fly like a bird free. 
Flair of celestial scene creates for me joyful reverie.

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Alison A Smith nee Howarth August 20, 2026 at 12:02 AM This is a wonderfully uplifting piece, Subimal! Your rich use of alliteration—especially with phrases like "halcyon horizon" and "cotton cloud clumps"—gives the poem a lovely, rhythmic musicality. The vivid imagery of the "cerulean satin sky" and the "flotilla" of clouds perfectly captures that yearning for freedom and weightlessness. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and inspiring start to the day.⭐ Subimal Sinha-Roy August 20, 2026 at 1:45 AM Thank you so much, Alison, for your read and such wonderful comments.I feel honoured to receive your encouraging observations and to know that it made an inspiring start of your day.