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Wrote this today 20/09/2026 in memory of a close friend. Heartbreaking indeed Brad be forever 23 yrs old. Took his life last week I'm still weepie. Suicide is on up esp men. Let's all care enough to talk about suicide. It's not weak to ask for help it's a strength. I wear hoodie on front says you are enough. Back says dear friend world a better place with you in it love person in front. People have thanked me for wearing it. Talked about there loved one taking their life. Too many hurting let's stand together be kind n show love n care. 

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Fly high beautiful Soul Brad


I sit here drifting back
Since I heard the devastating news
Brad your gone, can’t take it in
Fight to stay, overcame you
My love for you will never die 

You inspired me , more than you knew
Ten years ago in my brokenness, losing my mum
I was walking home, work sent me home
Sobbing my heart out, I met you, can see it clearly
Your smile, your kiss, your hug, your comfort

You took my hand we sat on the bench
Yup, one near Tesco’s store
Lovingly you gazed into my eyes
Said Dotti your a very special person
Loved by many and loved by me

Brad thank you for all you did 
It is all I needed to cope with my great loss 
I moved from kendal in January to Coniston 
I so missed bumping into you 
Missed your beautiful smile, your tender hugs

Brad your eyes danced with love n joy
I saw you fight many a battle in your head
You were amazing, simply the best
A role model for your beautiful nieces you loved
You loved your family so much

At times your demons overtook you 
Made you kick out your family 
That wasn’t the real you
I knew you loved them so deeply 
They loved you deeply too

My heart goes out to your dear Mum 
She’s an amazing warrior too
You were so proud of her, she won her fight
I remember day you told me how proud u were
Well my dear friend Brad, dedicate this to you

Fly high beautiful Soul 
You live on in all our hearts
I see you when a robin calls 
In the rainbow in the sky, after a storm
May God comfort all who are mourning you

Forever loved, never forgotten a legend
At peace now pretty boy
Lay down your sweet head
On heavens shore, in Jesus your safe
No more struggling, no battles in your head

Not goodbye Brad cya later pal
Fly high with angels to guide you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Cunningham Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 7:32 AM
Im sorry to see this Dorothy, my condolences to you, I remember my wife nagging me to go to the doctors as I was struggling to walk, needed an operation in the end. Men are reluctant to seek help probably thinking its a weakness but its not. If I hadnt gone I'd be in a wheelchair now. Beautiful tribute. Tom🌹
Gibbons Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 12:01 PM
Thank u dear Tom I still can't believe he's gone. 💔His poor mum struggling 😢 thank God u listened to ur wife n went in time.. my son same won't talk or go to a doc. I'm OK mum I'm a man . I keep saying talking n asking for help is not weaknessnits a strength hugz 🫂
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 8:06 AM
What a beautiful, beautiful love poem for someone in your life who enhanced it. Now, thru you, part of him remains 'here.' I can't listen to AI music, but I did for just a sec and I think your poem's a loving, emotive tribute that tugs the heart despite turning the music off. You were blessed to have had him actively in your life, and he, you. CayCay
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Not AI? Truly not an AI generated singer/sound and music? I don't understand but I would feel so relieved and uplifted knowing that it is NOT an AI thing that so many are doing. I can feel your sincerity in our 'talk', I know you believe it isn't AI, NOW - but I don't understand how / from where, you are able to put it all together. I want to if you've time and desire to 'learn me.' "all by myself" ... you've got skills, Dorothy Gibbons. I bet you understand electronics, too!
Gibbons Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 1:10 PM
Thank u sweet Cay Cay for your tender comment so love n appreciate my soup friends 🧡 hugzzz 🫂 not AI music I do it all myself and I pay monthly fee to keep copyright . Hope your well have a blessed week 🙏 love when u pop by 😘
Wolf Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 7:37 PM
Wow, talk about 'going through the wringer.'... May God comfort you and Brad's family in this, your time of sorrow.. ~ Gershon
Gibbons Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 7:29 AM
Thank u for reading n commenting on my tribute to my beautiful young friends suicide your tender comment Gershon hugz n blessings
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Gosh. I am sorry you lost this wonderful friend. It sounds like he was very troubled. A son of one of my sisters killed himself 5 years ago. Nobody had a clue because he hid it so well. There are organizations on the world now that actually are encouraging people to take their lives if they want to. Beyond sad. You write a great heartfelt poem here
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:33 PM
SAY WHAT? SITES ENCOURAGING SUICIDE? JUST WHEN I THOUGHT I COULDN'T BE FURTHER SHOCKED/DISTURBED. RIGHT NOW, I WANT OFF THE PLANET. OH, YI, WHAT???
Gibbons Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 2:58 AM
Thank you sweet Andrea for your tender comment. I know we live in such different world. Your right these sites that encourage ppl to end their lives. 😭💔😭 in UK suicide esp amoung young men like Brad on increase. It heartbreaking 💔 ive lost few friends and family to suicide. Makes me wanna spread the word you are enough. The world be sad place without you wear a hoodie with that on. If it even makes 1 person speak and seek help to stay it worth it. Suicide needs to be talked about, not brushed under carpet. Every life matters I shout it from rooftops if I can. Cruel words n judgemental attitudes need to stop. Share love, kindness care to all my new motto.🫂💞🦋
Scragg Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Such a tender beautiful tribute song that touches on the hard realities of the effects of mental health not just in the tragic results, but even on how it can cause ones to push loved ones away, and when they need them the most. The broken hearts remaining shows that people don't know how much they are loved and valued. I agree with your note, suicide is not taboo its an in issue in need of awareness. Let's end the silence for people like your dear friend Brad 💙💙💙💙 big hug Dorothy 🫂 🌹
Gibbons Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 11:06 PM
Thank you dear Natasha for your tender beautiful comment. It's sad world many struggling 😪 and too many suicides like Brad in young men. We need to reach out to men esp it's not weak to talk, seek help and attitude to suicide its not a cop out of life it's a drastic life, like you said can't grasp how much their loved as demons drown out the love. I really care and that's why I wear the hoodie encouraging ppl to stay world needs them 🫂❤️‍🩹 so glad u are with me in this. Mental health is real talking about it will help ppl all ages n genders to talk 👄 ✨️ hugzzz 🫂
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