FLY HIGH!

‘tis not this scape judgy?
‘lo, prey on the defenseless
short of a chirp, quite rationalized
facets of your twisted facade
the soul degrading you?
despises, despises theeself
thy insecurities shall protrude
thy good and their wrong spotlighted
i won’t get ready for this world
it will get ready for me
let their hearts pound in their chest
cause I’m fighting for those who can’t fight
it’s going the hell down
FLY HIGH! No one but you has lived a second of your life
FLY HIGH! The useless always negatively lie
FLY HIGH! We’ll prove our existence to those who reject it
TO THE SKY! F I G H T !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Empress Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 1:47 AM
Yesss what an empowering and uplifting poem this is! So well woven and delivered! I repeat with you, fly high, sky high, keep aiming for the stars, the ignorant wont see what you see, and the ones who judge should see better, not through foggy lenses! Brilliant flow to your well articulated lines! Pleasure reading your poem! Its so good to see you post after a while! Hope you are doing well poetic soul! Sending you light always!
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Aww, I love this!!! It's so happy and whimsy! The world will soon repeat if we can reach peace. And indeed, we should fly, even if its flying without the ignorant. I'm glad to be back; hope you're well too. <33
One Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:16 AM
This feels like a poem with a lot of spirit and defiance. Keep writing a your voice matters, and this piece shows courage, creativity, and heart.
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Aww, thank you. That means so much; indeed, avant-garde and defiance is necessary.
Poet Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Incredible poem defies and empowers in the face of injustice and adversity. It emphasizes resilience and advocating for oneself and those who cannot. You reject social judgments and celebrate individuals' identities, inspiring others to advocate for respect and equality.
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much, Sotto! I always look forward to your analysis. You thoroughly read my work. I agree with you; if only the world wasn't only for itself. Have a great weekend, equal :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Creative lines penned. We are responsible to God and according to God's law to the other humans who occupy this earth. So, we are open to flying high as long as it is right with God and doesn't harm mankind. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K .. I have always said don't fly too high because what goes up must come down.
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Sara!! Technically, if you go too high, you'll be pulled out of earth's gravitational force, and can keep going, haha. But I love your words nonetheless.
Crandall Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:36 PM
From the song "If 6 was 9", released in about, oh,...a long time ago - lol.
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:37 PM
Ahhh I love old music, listening to Queen right now :)
Crandall Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:35 PM
I love the lines: "I won't get ready for this world it will get ready for me". Somehow, I'm reminded of Jimi Hendrix, circa 1967, "i'm the one whose gonna have to die when it's my time to die, so let me live my life the way i want to", perfect except he should be telling, not asking.
Suri Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 9:37 PM
My math teaching taught me about him!!! I love your analysis, it's so fun! And I see the parellel
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