FLY HIGH!

‘tis not this scape judgy? ‘lo, prey on the defenseless short of a chirp, quite rationalized facets of your twisted facade the soul degrading you? despises, despises theeself thy insecurities shall protrude thy good and their wrong spotlighted i won’t get ready for this world it will get ready for me let their hearts pound in their chest cause I’m fighting for those who can’t fight it’s going the hell down FLY HIGH! No one but you has lived a second of your life FLY HIGH! The useless always negatively lie FLY HIGH! We’ll prove our existence to those who reject it TO THE SKY! F I G H T !

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/2/2025 1:47:00 AM

Yesss what an empowering and uplifting poem this is! So well woven and delivered! I repeat with you, fly high, sky high, keep aiming for the stars, the ignorant wont see what you see, and the ones who judge should see better, not through foggy lenses! Brilliant flow to your well articulated lines! Pleasure reading your poem! Its so good to see you post after a while! Hope you are doing well poetic soul! Sending you light always!

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:47:00 PM

Aww, I love this!!! It's so happy and whimsy! The world will soon repeat if we can reach peace. And indeed, we should fly, even if its flying without the ignorant. I'm glad to be back; hope you're well too. <33

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2025 11:16:00 AM

This feels like a poem with a lot of spirit and defiance. Keep writing a your voice matters, and this piece shows courage, creativity, and heart.

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:40:00 PM

Aww, thank you. That means so much; indeed, avant-garde and defiance is necessary.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/31/2025 5:49:00 AM

Incredible poem defies and empowers in the face of injustice and adversity. It emphasizes resilience and advocating for oneself and those who cannot. You reject social judgments and celebrate individuals' identities, inspiring others to advocate for respect and equality.

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sotto! I always look forward to your analysis. You thoroughly read my work. I agree with you; if only the world wasn't only for itself. Have a great weekend, equal :)

Tom Woody

Date: 5/31/2025 3:26:00 AM

Resistance is futile. Nobody gonna keep this gal down. Up, up, up... Have a great weekend Reya!

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:38:00 PM

Haha, indeed. I was feeling whimsical. Thank you! you too :))

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2025 10:32:00 PM

Creative lines penned. We are responsible to God and according to God's law to the other humans who occupy this earth. So, we are open to flying high as long as it is right with God and doesn't harm mankind. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K .. I have always said don't fly too high because what goes up must come down.

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:38:00 PM

Thank you Sara!! Technically, if you go too high, you'll be pulled out of earth's gravitational force, and can keep going, haha. But I love your words nonetheless.

David Crandall

Date: 5/30/2025 9:36:00 PM

From the song "If 6 was 9", released in about, oh,...a long time ago - lol.

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:37:00 PM

Ahhh I love old music, listening to Queen right now :)

David Crandall

Date: 5/30/2025 9:35:00 PM

I love the lines: "I won't get ready for this world it will get ready for me". Somehow, I'm reminded of Jimi Hendrix, circa 1967, "i'm the one whose gonna have to die when it's my time to die, so let me live my life the way i want to", perfect except he should be telling, not asking.

Reya Suri
Date: 6/2/2025 9:37:00 PM

My math teaching taught me about him!!! I love your analysis, it's so fun! And I see the parellel