Fly Fly

there was a fly who couldn't fly
got scared and wouldn't even try
so not to make a fuss
he would just take the bus
and you would just see him drive by
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Laurie Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Hello Timothy … flies tend to love riding on the corner of your eyes when you have both hands full. A limerick full of humour Timothy - thanks, Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
February 21, 2020 at 1:29 PM
You are right thanks
Turner Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Nasty business those dang flies. I do love limericks though Timothy. I think everybody loves to laugh. Nice job!
Mcguire Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thanks Daniel, being an Irish I love them too
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:20 AM
Absolutely delightful, Timothy. Well penned.
Mcguire Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:37 AM
Thank u!
Buehler Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 11:33 PM
Or maybe see him 'fly' by? :0 I enjoyed this funny limerick, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 11:36 PM
thank you Evelyn
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