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there was a fly who couldn't fly got scared and wouldn't even try so not to make a fuss he would just take the bus and you would just see him drive by

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Date: 2/20/2020 7:00:00 PM
Hello Timothy … flies tend to love riding on the corner of your eyes when you have both hands full. A limerick full of humour Timothy - thanks, Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/21/2020 1:29:00 PM
You are right thanks
Date: 2/20/2020 8:45:00 AM
Nasty business those dang flies. I do love limericks though Timothy. I think everybody loves to laugh. Nice job!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/20/2020 4:57:00 PM
Thanks Daniel, being an Irish I love them too
Date: 2/20/2020 1:20:00 AM
Absolutely delightful, Timothy. Well penned.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/20/2020 1:37:00 AM
Thank u!
Date: 2/19/2020 11:33:00 PM
Or maybe see him 'fly' by? :0 I enjoyed this funny limerick, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/19/2020 11:36:00 PM
thank you Evelyn

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