Fly

Reflex arc to soar
the bird climbs higher until
the wind breaks the wing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Beautifully poised.
Brown Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 7:21 AM
Excellent Haiku Erica. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:26 PM
Very evokative Haiku, dear Erica. Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. lainie
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September 10, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. You may want to put something in the title so people can access this easier. You can do that by editing. Enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Karen
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