Fly

"I can fly high above the white soft clouds I dream
Then the rain came and down I went with my self esteem."
Date Written: 9/23/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Faulkner Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 9:36 AM
I like the contrast of flying high then falling with the rain, nice touch on the dream/self esteem rhyme too~
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this dream write. Flying high can be fun in a dream. Have a blessed day..............
Skelly Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Whimsical write Paula, nicely done...Delice
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this whimsical write. It was a fun one to do. Have a blessed day..............
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2021 at 4:32 PM
cute message in this one, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day............
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