Fly

"I can fly high above the white soft clouds I dream Then the rain came and down I went with my self esteem." Date Written: 9/23/2021

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Date: 9/25/2021 9:36:00 AM

I like the contrast of flying high then falling with the rain, nice touch on the dream/self esteem rhyme too~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this dream write. Flying high can be fun in a dream. Have a blessed day..............

Date: 9/24/2021 8:20:00 AM

Whimsical write Paula, nicely done...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this whimsical write. It was a fun one to do. Have a blessed day..............

Date: 9/23/2021 4:32:00 PM

cute message in this one, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day............