Fly

He lived  unsober and high 
Thinking he could  fly 
like a bumble bee 
But he couldn't be 
He did try 
but fell and died before reaching sky
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Liwayway Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 2:31 AM
Nice poem. Just passing by to say hi. Have a good day
Omar Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 2:43 AM
Welcome any time .Hi
Alex Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:24 AM
Beautiful Limerick. Ironic. You have a very natural style of writing.
Poetry Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Just like Icarus melted before to reach the sun Vey well my friend healthy alkas
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