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"FLUX " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Flux

Cosmos in a flux

Not a thing remains the same

Dreaming permanence...!






 © Demetrios Trifiatis
       17 April 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Williams Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Change is inevitable, but not always for the better, and some of the changes we are seeing nowadays are downright scary. For the good of all or for the good of the Greedy? Questionable indeed! Powerful Haiku, certainly one to ponder dearest Demetrios....Maria xxx
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April 17, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Maria, my dearest friend, I appreciate your presence here and your comment! Thank you! xxx
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 6:49 AM
What a beautiful view of rose buds and rose..a dynamic world right there..good one my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:36 AM
What a wonderful comment...thank you dear friend, Vijay!
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Don't mind a little fluxing...but as you said, " dreaming of permanence" I wish for instead...
Trifiatis Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:44 AM
The Flux is universal and eternal as Heraclitus the Greek philosopher of the 6th century BC has stated! Thank you for your visit and delightful comment dear, Arturo!
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:06 AM
But yet does not appear to move when we look, the mysteries of the universe. Tom.
Trifiatis Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:35 AM
...well, my dear friend, Tom, when we look at a bud blooming we realize how things change! The real change we see with the " our mind's eye" as Socrates says! Thank you for you precious visits!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 2:42 AM
- Everything changes ... dramatic changes - A poem for the day - Beautiful photo, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 5:31 AM
The only permanent thing is change my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you. Hugs xxx
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