Fluttering Willow

fluttering willow a magical wind dancer flowing so softly beautifully follows wind’s lead fluidly without fail

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/2/2019 6:55:00 PM

Ah, another "fav". Great Tanka; I love willows.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/2/2019 11:54:00 PM

We have built three houses, and I have planted four willows. My favorite one died after 7 years, and it was magnificent!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/29/2018 10:02:00 PM

Your poem's lovely imagery is airy and graceful, and I behold the fluttering willow in my mind. A beautiful tanka, Caren. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/30/2018 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Susan. I love nature so much, some of these pop out pretty often. Happy New Year my friend!