Fluttering Willow

fluttering willow
a magical wind dancer
flowing so softly
beautifully follows wind’s lead
fluidly without fail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Ah, another "fav". Great Tanka; I love willows.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:54 PM
We have built three houses, and I have planted four willows. My favorite one died after 7 years, and it was magnificent!
Ashley Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Your poem's lovely imagery is airy and graceful, and I behold the fluttering willow in my mind. A beautiful tanka, Caren. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 12:15 AM
Thank you Susan. I love nature so much, some of these pop out pretty often. Happy New Year my friend!
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