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Fluttering Souls

Flutter
                               Look up I see
                      Their souls flittering past
          Down here smell carnage, hear clink, slash
               neighing a warning, another one falls
               Crunch of bone- stampeding to death
                      Screams of dying horses
                           Take me from here	
                                     Flutter






For the "SOUND OF EMOTION "
sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Written poem date 6/1/201
by A. Green

Copyright © Amy Green | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/5/2012 11:05:00 AM A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Amy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 6/4/2012 6:18:00 AM poetically beautiful and soulfully tragic. Ya got me good with this one, Amy! Outstanding write Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/3/2012 6:38:00 PM AMY , Congratulations with your DEEP "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/3/2012 1:43:00 PM Congrats on your win Amy.Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/3/2012 12:46:00 PM Amy, congrats on your win! This is terribly disturbing and sad. I'm sure it wasn't easy for you to write. Though, someone has to speak for those who cannot speak for themselves. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/3/2012 12:26:00 PM Congrats on your win in Nette's contest..There were so many great works that were entered..This one was so descriptive and expressive...Sara Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/3/2012 9:48:00 AM this sound made my heart skip, amy.. congrats on your win in my contest!.:) huggs! Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 6/3/2012 7:58:00 AM Great write,Amy....congratulations on your win with this wonderful piece.... Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 6/3/2012 5:25:00 AM Amy congrats on your win, wow great..David Login to Reply

Amy Green Date: 6/3/2012 12:10:00 AM Andrea- this is actually from the horse's perspective at a slaughter plant...Had I wrote it how I really wanted to... no one would be able to read it, including me. But thank yoy nonetheless! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/2/2012 4:30:00 PM oh my you did it on the horses you love so dearly. This is sad but I love h ow you had their souls carried to heaven. Login to Reply

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 6:26:00 AM Love this work of art here!!! Excellent write!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/1/2012 12:05:00 PM chanced upon your poem, amy.. kindly add your name and date of poem... best of luck!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Shaz Cheesman Date: 6/1/2012 3:44:00 AM Sad poem :( but a good poem. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/1/2012 1:15:00 AM Interedting take on the contest theme.Enjoyed.Best wishes. Login to Reply Kash Poet Date: 6/3/2012 1:43:00 PM Interesting....