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Fading, Floating, Fluttering Words Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 written 9/22/2023 

"It comes to me in childlike dreams, a peaceful place to run away too." Quote by_ poet Fluttering in the enchanted garden, luxuriant foliage unburden. Serene illuminated by fair hues of gay sunshine overflowing muse. Buzzing bees and colorful butterflies, teasing the lavish flora's pretty eyes. Flipping, swirling in midair a small fay, gay pixies lurking so childlike in play. Labyrinths flight through ivies, trees they fly, like popcorn popping quickly go awry.

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Date: 10/9/2023 2:26:00 PM
Eve, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your quote, Constance
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:00:00 PM
Overwhelming imagery in each line, Eve, There is no way, I could write this way, you are amazing. Pangie x
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Date: 9/27/2023 11:31:00 PM
Excellent work, Eve, congratulations:)
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Date: 9/25/2023 9:50:00 PM
Loved this poem Eve! :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 3:27:00 AM
That last line is so unique, i really love the wordplay and how you’ve painted imagery in such eloquence. The flow and the way you’ve played around with words too and how you’ve shown us such a serene ambience through words is impeccable! Absolutely loved reading this
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:57:00 AM
Fantastic poem plus use of alliteration. Great thoughts. Hugs xx
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:47:00 AM
this is a wonderful little poem on fluttering. Great job.
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Date: 9/22/2023 8:04:00 PM
vivid imagery brings this enchanted garden to life...i am not good with rhymes so always admire a good rhyming poem ... best wishes in the contest with this lovely write!
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Date: 9/22/2023 2:13:00 PM
I love this Eve you have out done yourself Hugs Shadow
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Date: 9/22/2023 12:26:00 PM
Lovely imagery my friend.. very poetic and you have expressed this contest very well..
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Date: 9/22/2023 11:14:00 AM
- I enjoy the enchanted garden ... lovely written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/22/2023 5:17:00 AM
That well-composed poem, Eve, enjoyed so much. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/22/2023 12:48:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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