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Fading, Floating, Fluttering Words Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 written 9/22/2023 

Fluttering

"It comes to me in childlike dreams, a peaceful place to run away too." Quote by_ poet Fluttering in the enchanted garden, luxuriant foliage unburden. Serene illuminated by fair hues of gay sunshine overflowing muse. Buzzing bees and colorful butterflies, teasing the lavish flora's pretty eyes. Flipping, swirling in midair a small fay, gay pixies lurking so childlike in play. Labyrinths flight through ivies, trees they fly, like popcorn popping quickly go awry.
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La France Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Eve, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your quote, Constance
Romios Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Overwhelming imagery in each line, Eve, There is no way, I could write this way, you are amazing. Pangie x
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 11:31 PM
Excellent work, Eve, congratulations:)
Vaso Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 9:50 PM
Loved this poem Eve! :)
Empress Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:27 AM
That last line is so unique, i really love the wordplay and how you’ve painted imagery in such eloquence. The flow and the way you’ve played around with words too and how you’ve shown us such a serene ambience through words is impeccable! Absolutely loved reading this
Buhagiar Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Fantastic poem plus use of alliteration. Great thoughts. Hugs xx
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 9:47 AM
this is a wonderful little poem on fluttering. Great job.
Adams Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 8:04 PM
vivid imagery brings this enchanted garden to life...i am not good with rhymes so always admire a good rhyming poem ... best wishes in the contest with this lovely write!
Hamilton Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 2:13 PM
I love this Eve you have out done yourself Hugs Shadow
One Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Lovely imagery my friend.. very poetic and you have expressed this contest very well..
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 11:14 AM
- I enjoy the enchanted garden ... lovely written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:17 AM
That well-composed poem, Eve, enjoyed so much. Best wishes for the contest
Meadows Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 12:48 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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