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Fluttered Reminisces

There was poetry in her deliverance as she was swathed by butterflies, whilst cosmoses glinted 'tween tranquil transcendency furthermost harmoniously fluttered reminisces like a flower gently unfolding, flourishing a deeper kinda nectar

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/12/2016 1:45:00 PM

I agree w/Lewis. A well penned jewel. This would not perchance be that nectar of the gods, eh. You clever, clever lady. Love the poem though. Love and blessings to you, Paloma.

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 11/11/2016 3:54:00 AM

A lovely depiction.. well penned ;-)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/10/2016 2:08:00 PM

What a lovely deliverance, Paloma! I can feel peaceful serenity, mellowness and gentleness oozing out of these lines. ~ Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/9/2016 3:56:00 PM

Beautiful Paloma....leaves a sad mystery as if not to trust what may be so beautiful as if something else is underneath.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2016 3:51:00 PM

So pretty. Love that last part!!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/9/2016 3:35:00 PM

Lovely poetry Paloma

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2016 3:31:00 PM

Very beautiful Paloma:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/9/2016 2:30:00 PM

So beautiful...

Chris Green

Date: 11/9/2016 1:34:00 PM

My friend, this was perfect, I love the upper half with it's whimsical, bright, poetic feel combined with the final two lines that say to me, don't let the aromatic words above fool you, this is real. That is so cool how you did that. You are very talented, that's for sure.

Christy Stover

Date: 11/9/2016 1:15:00 PM

Absolutely lovely.