Paloma P Poet Free verse

Fluttered Reminisces

There was poetry in her deliverance
 as she was swathed by butterflies,
whilst cosmoses glinted 'tween
tranquil transcendency furthermost
harmoniously fluttered reminisces


like a flower gently unfolding,

flourishing a deeper kinda nectar

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Freddie Robinson Jr. November 12, 2016 at 1:45 PM I agree w/Lewis. A well penned jewel. This would not perchance be that nectar of the gods, eh. You clever, clever lady. Love the poem though. Love and blessings to you, Paloma.

Lewis Nyaga November 11, 2016 at 3:54 AM A lovely depiction.. well penned ;-)

Paul Callus November 10, 2016 at 2:08 PM What a lovely deliverance, Paloma! I can feel peaceful serenity, mellowness and gentleness oozing out of these lines. ~ Regards // paul

Heidi Sands November 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM Beautiful Paloma....leaves a sad mystery as if not to trust what may be so beautiful as if something else is underneath.

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2016 at 3:51 PM So pretty. Love that last part!!

Tim Smith November 9, 2016 at 3:35 PM Lovely poetry Paloma

Jan Allison November 9, 2016 at 3:31 PM Very beautiful Paloma:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop November 9, 2016 at 2:30 PM So beautiful...

Chris Green November 9, 2016 at 1:34 PM My friend, this was perfect, I love the upper half with it's whimsical, bright, poetic feel combined with the final two lines that say to me, don't let the aromatic words above fool you, this is real. That is so cool how you did that. You are very talented, that's for sure.

Christy Stover November 9, 2016 at 1:15 PM Absolutely lovely.