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flutter and stream

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Below is the poem entitled flutter and stream which was written by poet Jack Jordan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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flutter and stream

flutter and stream
quiver and sweat
weep and shout
spasms of intense sensation 
visualization of pure bliss
hot breath of life
divine but bloodless
salvation in the guts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 8/13/2017 3:36:00 PM
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Date: 2/2/2013 12:35:00 PM
very descriptive writing!
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Date: 2/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
Date: 2/1/2013 12:43:00 PM
Boy! This leaves the imagination free to go wild... loved it
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Date: 2/1/2013 12:47:00 PM
Thanks... I'm glad it worked that way for you. Wild imaginations are a good thing, in my humble opinion. Jack