Flutter and Stream

flutter and stream
quiver and sweat
weep and shout
spasms of intense sensation 
visualization of pure bliss
hot breath of life
divine but bloodless
salvation in the guts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Joshua Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Cool!
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:35 PM
very descriptive writing!
Jordan Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Thanks!
Jones Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Boy! This leaves the imagination free to go wild... loved it
Jordan Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Thanks... I'm glad it worked that way for you. Wild imaginations are a good thing, in my humble opinion. Jack
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