I had the haiku idea about the snowflakes this morning. Arriving at work I came up with two other versions that start and end the same but have entirely different meanings and nuances
flurries of snowflakes seem to be lighter than air defy gravity flurries of snowflakes living to float on the air defy gravity flurries of snowflakes yearning to reach for the sky defy gravity
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