Flu

FLU Well guess I was due Feeling dumpy hot and chill A touch of the flu But have things to do Can world survive without me? Head aches full of spew My bod feels like lead The world can wait a spell I’m going to bed!

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/30/2011 8:57:00 AM

Ha hA HA! dAVER, THIS IS TOO FUNNY... this ole nurse likes this poet's spin on the flu! Enjoy your therapeutic usage of pause....nice! Gwendolen ps-are u so sure Moses wasn't a Catholic? ha ha

James Foulk

Date: 4/20/2011 12:26:00 PM

thank you Daver for commenting on Spring Time Follies, yes i love the wild creatures, reason why i write about them so much, is i feel so close to them, sometimes i can sense what they are thinking or would do if they could, so i write about it. thanks for your support.

James Foulk

Date: 4/17/2011 9:01:00 PM

seem goes for me, having the flu is a nasty thing to have. a great write Daver, keep up the posting, enjoy your poetry.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2011 9:00:00 AM

Ironically, the world does seem to get along just fine without us, Daver. Hope you don't really have the flu, but if you do, please get some rest and reel well soon. You injected some humor into this poem and I enjoyed reading it. I know you don't read blogs, but I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 9:07:00 AM

Yes, seasonal, daver