Flu

FLU

Well   guess I was due
Feeling dumpy    hot and chill
A touch of the flu

But have things to do
Can world survive without me?
Head aches    full of spew

My bod feels like lead
The world can wait a spell
I’m going to bed!

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Gwendolen Song

April 30, 2011 at 8:57 AM

Ha hA HA! dAVER, THIS IS TOO FUNNY... this ole nurse likes this poet's spin on the flu! Enjoy your therapeutic usage of pause....nice! Gwendolen ps-are u so sure Moses wasn't a Catholic? ha ha

James Foulk

April 20, 2011 at 12:26 PM

thank you Daver for commenting on Spring Time Follies, yes i love the wild creatures, reason why i write about them so much, is i feel so close to them, sometimes i can sense what they are thinking or would do if they could, so i write about it. thanks for your support.

James Foulk

April 17, 2011 at 9:01 PM

seem goes for me, having the flu is a nasty thing to have. a great write Daver, keep up the posting, enjoy your poetry.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 17, 2011 at 9:00 AM

Ironically, the world does seem to get along just fine without us, Daver. Hope you don't really have the flu, but if you do, please get some rest and reel well soon. You injected some humor into this poem and I enjoyed reading it. I know you don't read blogs, but I'm out of town fishing until after Easter -- returning home May 4. Have an EKG May 5. Have a wonderful Easter, my friend! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 15, 2011 at 9:07 AM

Yes, seasonal, daver

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