Flowing Thoughts

FLOWING THOUGHTS

When love flows free,
In abundance,
And you feel all the earths
Chains have been released,
The time has come
For exultation!

Rejoice now,
For tomorrow may be
Too late, and as beautiful,
As love may seem,
Cruelly it is beaten to death
By its own master, Man.

Within you, lives
The secret,
And the knowledge 
Is painful,
The need for sharing,
Reaches an extremity!
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Chiri Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 12:01 AM
This held a sweetness to it! And love no matter the emotion is still grand! Even in its heartache there is still poetry in it!;) loved this!;)
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November 26, 2019 at 4:04 AM
Brenda, thank-you so much for an awesome comment- I'm glad you sensed the heartache in it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Yes, we must live day-by-day and in the moment. Very well inked Jennifer. (true) Hugs Charlie
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 4:02 AM
Thank-you Charles - it wrote this poem some years ago, must have been in a somewhat pensive mood at the time. A lovely comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 5:53 PM
This is quite true; well penned.
Proxenos Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Thank you MLK, it is our only route to go and maybe one day, with God's judgement and blessing, I will enter His Kingdom, if he deems me fit! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 24, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Yes indeed--rejoice now! Good advice, Jennifer--a message well delivered.
Proxenos Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 10:25 PM
To rejoice now is to accept now, and accepting now is our preparation! Thank-you Vijay for your all your thoughtful comments! Hugs and blessings, Jenninfer.
Laurie Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Hello Jennifer … very wise adage indeed. There is no guarantee of a tomorrow so don't hold back - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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November 24, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Thank-you Lindsay, a friend of ours was diagnosed with Cancer in June this year, he phoned us in tears, he died in September this year. A very sad emotional time especially for my husband, they were friends over a span of 55 years. One never knows. Thank you Lindsay for your powerful comment. Hugs, Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Rejoice now!
Proxenos Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Hi Kim, Great to have you visit, thanks for the comment, so true! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 3:36 PM
I totally agree.. live for the moment..say what you have to say and what needs to be sAid before it is too late... Wise words indeed..
Proxenos Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Things do need to be said and done - how do we know when our name is on God's waiting list, having said that, I don't know if you ever read my poem I wrote last year titled 'God's waiting list' It is a humorous poem. Thank you for your wonderful support and friendship SO, I respect and enjoy it. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Fine write Jenny, bringing out some real fine advice for indeed we don't know what will happen tomorrow. Trust you're having a blessed weekend, Gordon
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November 24, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Thank-you Gordon, indeed life and death are put a second apart, we should accept this and be prepared - I would like that second to last a lot longer but it is God's decision. Hope you are well my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Excellent poem Jennifer! Well written :)
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November 23, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Hi Heidi, Always great to have you visit, thank you for your kind words. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 11:40 AM
this was simply lovely. Ann
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November 23, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Thank-you Ann, my friend, God is always there watching and knowing - He is omniscient and compassionate. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Rejoice everyday in God's love. Show it to others for there is no promise of a tomorrow. It hit me in the face when I lost my daughter at the age of 37 this month four years ago. It left a whole until I learned to live in the moment no matter what others around me were doing. I see God is the master and always in command. It helps me to realize just how special my life truly is.
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November 23, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Hi Bette, I am so sorry, my heart is really sore to hear this, what I have learnt from life is that you can not plan for tomorrow, we must live in the moment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 6:46 AM
If I read nothing else today that speaks to my heart it is okay for I have read this. "Rejoice now, For tomorrow may be Too late, " - EXACTLY!
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November 23, 2019 at 12:13 PM
This is the most beautiful comment I have received today, thank-you Caren. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 22, 2019 at 11:20 PM
A wonderful write. God is Love and to love is of God. I love this. God bless you dear friend, Gina
Proxenos Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Any emotion we feel is of God and so then is love - thank-you that you love my poems, I love yours Gina! Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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November 22, 2019 at 8:27 PM
tomorrow is never promised so we must live everyday and share the love within our hearts for one day it will die with us... love this one Jennifer.... hugs
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November 23, 2019 at 12:08 PM
You are so right Sandy and who would not want to give all the love in their hearts and share it with others, a selfless approach to life! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Bayles Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Very nice, Jennifer.
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November 23, 2019 at 11:59 AM
Hi Mike, Thank you for the visit and your comment. Hugs, Jennifer.
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November 22, 2019 at 1:57 PM
Seize the moment and live it , nobody knows what's around the corner. Have a nice weekend Jennifer. Tom.
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November 23, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Hi Tom, We might not be given a 2nd chance, hope you have a lovely Sunday! Blessings, Jennifer
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November 22, 2019 at 1:52 PM
- So true my friend: "Rejoice now, For tomorrow may be Too late ..." - I wish you a lovely weekend, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 26, 2019 at 8:06 AM
How is this little darling?
Proxenos Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 11:54 AM
Absolutely my friend! Hope you have a wondrous Sunday! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
May Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Jen, your spoken words set into my mind with wonder you write so divine! Love Ya! Sis!!!
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November 22, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Thank-you Bobby a lovely compliment my friend. I love all your poems which you give creative flair to! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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