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Flowing River

sweet love from a rock
like a river flowing down
a spring for new life

© Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 6/14/08
All Rights Reserved, Milwaukee, Wisconsin, USA
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Tk Ross Date: 6/22/2010 7:32:00 PM I am really in a haiku kind of mood this week, and I really enjoyed this one!--TK Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/31/2010 2:31:00 PM Nice Haiku, just enjoying short reads today. Sounds ike good buy to the cold, enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Frances King Date: 7/4/2009 3:08:00 PM This is so beautiful - a lesson from the Haiku master! Thank you for your welcome, glad you like my first attempt at Haiku form. I promise to do more homework ... Frances Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 5/14/2009 2:14:00 AM Joseph,...aside from the fact that I'm partial to this poetry because I see here that you wrote it on the day of my birth,..not year of course *smiles*,..Its just awesome,..this one is loaded ! I love it,..great Haiku. james you have soup mail Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/16/2009 1:13:00 AM Great flow and nice imagery. One of my favorite forms...Raul Login to Reply

Mc Mc Date: 10/24/2008 10:40:00 PM a lovely bouquet! thanks for the poem and your comments! Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 10/24/2008 7:22:00 AM nice sweet nature is always so inspirational Login to Reply

Dawn Kilby Date: 10/23/2008 8:36:00 AM very sweetly penned :P Login to Reply

Joi Simms Date: 9/7/2008 3:24:00 PM This haiku has such implications, hidden meanings, and imagery. I like it. Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 8/13/2008 4:03:00 PM What a gentle piece this is wonderful write! Laura :) Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/1/2008 11:08:00 AM what a refreshing piece of poetry, so gentle to read. Login to Reply

Adell Foster Date: 7/22/2008 8:58:00 AM This is a very lovely haihu write, in form, imagery and tone... instantly the lyrics of "Jesus love is like a river flowing gently through my soul..." came to mind. The serenity that flows through the lines of this piece is truly superb. Thank you for sharing. God Bless, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Mary Duhart Date: 7/8/2008 1:16:00 PM Nicely done. Message conveyed nicely in so few words. Login to Reply

Cayetano Young Date: 7/6/2008 8:42:00 PM simple yet candid.nice write, always GiNo, 18 Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 7/6/2008 4:57:00 AM Very loving and simply awesome in content and context. Love, Ivy Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 7/3/2008 10:53:00 AM excellant write again Joe can see the new life flowing free spirited keep on sharing dear friend one day will have a full bowl of soup again without the crackers hehehe hugs dear friend Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 6/28/2008 8:15:00 AM So much here. Such love and hope. Incredibly beautiful. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Kristin Reynolds Date: 6/14/2008 5:40:00 PM A beautiful, peaceful poem of love, renewal and hope - i love the short forms, they make one read between the lines...so well done. Blessings hun, Kristin Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 6/14/2008 5:19:00 PM joseph what I truly love about your haiku's is the way the invoke so much thought - excellent use of the form as always - i hope you and your family are enjoying all the blessings in life - I go in for back surgery on Monday so unfortunately I'll be absent for awhile but always you and yours are in my families prayers - God bless Joseph Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 6/14/2008 4:05:00 PM This is short, Joseph, but these poems always leave one thinking volumes. Interesting how you can have one idea that can spread out and travel such long distances. :) Hope that all's well with you and yours..am very happy to see you had more postings. That 'rock' must be metamorphical, because your muse certainly is part of it. Oh well, before I ramble on again =/...I will wish you and yours the best! God bless you...Mikki :) Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 6/14/2008 1:59:00 PM Perfect Haiku word~flow , Joseph , just like your river... Login to Reply

Jay Del Fierro Date: 6/14/2008 12:08:00 PM nice...serene,peaceful,yet hopeful in faith....peace , jay Login to Reply