Flowing River

I am really in a haiku kind of mood this week, and I really enjoyed this one!--TK

Nice Haiku, just enjoying short reads today. Sounds ike good buy to the cold, enjoyed,..p.d.

This is so beautiful - a lesson from the Haiku master! Thank you for your welcome, glad you like my first attempt at Haiku form. I promise to do more homework ... Frances

Joseph,...aside from the fact that I'm partial to this poetry because I see here that you wrote it on the day of my birth,..not year of course *smiles*,..Its just awesome,..this one is loaded ! I love it,..great Haiku. james you have soup mail

Great flow and nice imagery. One of my favorite forms...Raul

a lovely bouquet! thanks for the poem and your comments!

nice sweet nature is always so inspirational

very sweetly penned :P

This haiku has such implications, hidden meanings, and imagery. I like it.

What a gentle piece this is wonderful write! Laura :)

what a refreshing piece of poetry, so gentle to read.

This is a very lovely haihu write, in form, imagery and tone... instantly the lyrics of "Jesus love is like a river flowing gently through my soul..." came to mind. The serenity that flows through the lines of this piece is truly superb. Thank you for sharing. God Bless, Always, Adell

Nicely done. Message conveyed nicely in so few words.

simple yet candid.nice write, always GiNo, 18

Very loving and simply awesome in content and context. Love, Ivy

excellant write again Joe can see the new life flowing free spirited keep on sharing dear friend one day will have a full bowl of soup again without the crackers hehehe hugs dear friend

So much here. Such love and hope. Incredibly beautiful. Love, Shar

A beautiful, peaceful poem of love, renewal and hope - i love the short forms, they make one read between the lines...so well done. Blessings hun, Kristin

joseph what I truly love about your haiku's is the way the invoke so much thought - excellent use of the form as always - i hope you and your family are enjoying all the blessings in life - I go in for back surgery on Monday so unfortunately I'll be absent for awhile but always you and yours are in my families prayers - God bless Joseph

This is short, Joseph, but these poems always leave one thinking volumes. Interesting how you can have one idea that can spread out and travel such long distances. :) Hope that all's well with you and yours..am very happy to see you had more postings. That 'rock' must be metamorphical, because your muse certainly is part of it. Oh well, before I ramble on again =/...I will wish you and yours the best! God bless you...Mikki :)

Perfect Haiku word~flow , Joseph , just like your river...

nice...serene,peaceful,yet hopeful in faith....peace , jay