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Flowing Refreshment

Titillating drops of pleasure fall, Showering down, halting tension's thrall. Soothing warmth massages, eases pain, Dispatching stressful remnants down the drain. Caressed by warm pulsating stream, I surrender myself to lazy dreams. Imagining I'm in a far off place, Wrapped in serenity's sweet embrace. Floral fragrance with mist pirouettes, Arousing senses, reviving zest. Scrubbing away all dirt and stress, I emerge relaxed, at peace, refreshed. 9/28/2011 Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Your own Favorite Poem contest.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 2:48:00 AM

KIM,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

George Aul

Date: 2/8/2012 11:12:00 AM

Congrats on a relaxing poem.......George

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/8/2012 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win,Kim

Don Johnson

Date: 2/7/2012 9:05:00 PM

sounds like a great place to be, where stress n tension let you be... well done ....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2012 1:41:00 PM

congrats Kim on a remarkable win for this tremendous poetry.. mesmerizing lines luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/7/2012 10:21:00 AM

Congrats, Kim. Awesome write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/7/2012 8:55:00 AM

Mmmmm. So relaxing Kim Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2011 12:57:00 AM

I see you won in the contest from the remarks below. Glad I came upon this sweet flowing poem!! HOpefully I will see you tomorrow. Just can't find time for Soup much these days. It's making me feel disheartened! LUv , Andrea

Shani Fassbender

Date: 10/5/2011 8:42:00 PM

Very refreshing!!! Wonderfully written.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/2/2011 1:10:00 AM

Appreciate the time that you placed in making this such an original piece. Well done, I really enjoyed reading your poems tonite. lee

Don Johnson

Date: 10/1/2011 4:36:00 AM

serenity's embrace, sounds like a tonic just in place, well said babe...

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/1/2011 12:38:00 AM

Liked this one Kim. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/30/2011 11:08:00 PM

Congrats Kim on amazing win with lovely lines in flowing waters contest.. a rare beauty luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/30/2011 11:01:00 PM

congrats on your 9th place win in the contest Kim, nicely done

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/30/2011 1:27:00 AM

very beautiful and definitely peaceful all the best to you in the contest, truly enjoyed reading your words this evening,,Blessings..Cecil

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/29/2011 11:42:00 AM

love tis, so different Kim, yet the message is there for all to read. Awesome. Harry

Wayne Hill

Date: 9/28/2011 11:38:00 PM

I felt clean and peaceful reading this masterpiece.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/28/2011 6:16:00 PM

This is my FAVORITE OF THE DAY!!!!! Glad I didn't skip my shower today for as you have written here, I wouldn't be as relaxed and at peace. You are awesome, poet!! Just awesome! I just started gathering info for my water poem this afternoon. I fear I won't get it done in time...oh well, ....U will hit the top with this one! Gwendolen