Kim Merryman Poet Couplet

Flowing Refreshment

Titillating drops of pleasure fall,
Showering down, halting tension's thrall.
Soothing warmth massages, eases pain,
Dispatching stressful remnants down the drain.

Caressed by warm pulsating stream,
I surrender myself to lazy dreams.
Imagining I'm in a far off place,
Wrapped in serenity's sweet embrace.

Floral fragrance with mist pirouettes,
Arousing senses, reviving zest.
Scrubbing away all dirt and stress,
I emerge relaxed, at peace, refreshed.


  9/28/2011
Entered in Debbie Guzzi's  Your own Favorite Poem contest.

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Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2012 at 2:48 AM KIM,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

George Aul February 8, 2012 at 11:12 AM Congrats on a relaxing poem.......George

Fabiyas M V February 8, 2012 at 8:14 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win,Kim

Don Johnson February 7, 2012 at 9:05 PM sounds like a great place to be, where stress n tension let you be... well done ....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 7, 2012 at 1:41 PM congrats Kim on a remarkable win for this tremendous poetry.. mesmerizing lines luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown February 7, 2012 at 12:06 PM Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor February 7, 2012 at 10:21 AM Congrats, Kim. Awesome write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph

Bob Quigley February 7, 2012 at 8:55 AM Mmmmm. So relaxing Kim Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2011 at 12:57 AM I see you won in the contest from the remarks below. Glad I came upon this sweet flowing poem!! HOpefully I will see you tomorrow. Just can't find time for Soup much these days. It's making me feel disheartened! LUv , Andrea

Shani Fassbender October 5, 2011 at 8:42 PM Very refreshing!!! Wonderfully written.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 3, 2011 at 8:35 AM Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage October 2, 2011 at 1:10 AM Appreciate the time that you placed in making this such an original piece. Well done, I really enjoyed reading your poems tonite. lee

Don Johnson October 1, 2011 at 4:36 AM serenity's embrace, sounds like a tonic just in place, well said babe...

Bob Quigley October 1, 2011 at 12:38 AM Liked this one Kim. Congratulations

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 30, 2011 at 11:08 PM Congrats Kim on amazing win with lovely lines in flowing waters contest.. a rare beauty luv..

Francine Roberts September 30, 2011 at 11:01 PM congrats on your 9th place win in the contest Kim, nicely done

Cecil Hickman September 30, 2011 at 1:27 AM very beautiful and definitely peaceful all the best to you in the contest, truly enjoyed reading your words this evening,,Blessings..Cecil

Harry Horsman September 29, 2011 at 11:42 AM love tis, so different Kim, yet the message is there for all to read. Awesome. Harry

Wayne Hill September 28, 2011 at 11:38 PM I felt clean and peaceful reading this masterpiece.

Gwendolen Song September 28, 2011 at 6:16 PM This is my FAVORITE OF THE DAY!!!!! Glad I didn't skip my shower today for as you have written here, I wouldn't be as relaxed and at peace. You are awesome, poet!! Just awesome! I just started gathering info for my water poem this afternoon. I fear I won't get it done in time...oh well, ....U will hit the top with this one! Gwendolen

Ilene Bauer September 28, 2011 at 12:21 PM beautifully written. it actually made me feel relaxed just to read it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 28, 2011 at 12:04 PM well I feel squeeky clean from these awesomely brilliant words of flowing refreshment Kim.. good luck in the contest luv.. will do well ...

Francine Roberts September 28, 2011 at 11:15 AM line 9, typo fragrance, fix before judging please

Tony Lane September 28, 2011 at 9:28 AM Yikes Kim. I think I'm too old to read this. It is very hot. Tony Francine Roberts September 28, 2011 at 11:15 AM wipe the drool off your chin Tony