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Flowing Love

Our love flows,  
a swiftly moving stream.
Flowing into raging rapids,
this is better than any dream.
Movement slows,
beads of sweat trickle.
She turns over onto her stomach,
exposing a booty dimple.
Touching, 
exploring,
speaking now in riddles.
Love flows,
Intense.
We lay, 
her head on my chest.
Both still delirious,
left motionless in suspense.
Drained,
from our flowing love... 
 

Jared Pickett
11/28/09
Asavvy1

lifefree verse

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Michelle Norvell

January 31, 2010 at 3:11 PM

wonderful write! love your work. best to you.....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 2, 2009 at 4:20 PM

Soup Mail .. ASavvy 1 from "Sweetie"

Mary Meade Stephenson

December 2, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Beautiful and filled with passion ... a delightful read..thanks for sharing...Mary

Tobey Hill

December 2, 2009 at 6:45 AM

well done...you gotta love the booty dimple....TAH

Richard Pickett

November 30, 2009 at 5:46 AM

This is a good work son, Glad to see you're back in the saddle. BTW we live in Iowa now. write me at my e-mail for more

Izzy Gumbo

November 29, 2009 at 7:48 PM

balush! well done Jared :) Enjoyed it much!

Doris Culverhouse

November 29, 2009 at 6:39 PM

thanks for letting me know about your father!! I will check him out, it runs in your family too! :)

Colleen Bono

November 29, 2009 at 12:15 PM

Very good,Read my poem Today is teh Day.It's a spirit lifter.

Simone Segal

November 29, 2009 at 5:17 AM

Very steamy write!!! enjoyed by Simone

Charmaine Chircop

November 28, 2009 at 10:39 PM

Asavvy you fogged Raul's computer screen,Do you know the fog reached my little island too,my computer.. all steamy, just kidding..This is very passionate and sweet,Asavvy style.. i hope this CONSEULO of yours is reading,,it surely worth to read--Charma:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 28, 2009 at 8:10 PM

Did u read your Soup Mail yet?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 28, 2009 at 8:06 PM

Well I must give credit where credit is due.. regarding The Legend.. in his own mind.. its your swager that gave me the idea, plus experience, plus my brother brought back all the memories of what we did in our party hearty days (which are not over yet, I might add) and this came out of my pen on the drive home from Pittsburgh.. so I will give u credit Asavvy 1 .. u earned it... don't forget the "lone wolf" project... luv.. "Sweetheart" U will always be a legend in my eyes...